【DMM英会話学習記録】 2026年8月6日のレッスン

DMM英会話のレッスンの録音データから、修正点や改善点を指摘してくれるプログラムを開発し、毎日のレッスン後に振り返りをしています。

レッスン要約

レッスンでは、仕事を辞めたいと考える日本人労働者に関する記事を読み、その内容について議論しました。学習者は、職場のストレスや不満が転職のきっかけになること、また自分は仕事やスキル向上を重視していることを話しました。さらに、仕事と私生活の切り分けや、ストレスへの向き合い方、良い職場の条件についても意見を述べました。

改善ポイント

元の発話: It's not surprising to me because if
we have a lot of...
stress or complaint about
the workplace,
we
should change our jobs.
推奨表現: It's not surprising to me because if we have a lot of stress or complaints about the workplace, we should change jobs.
理由: complaint はここでは複数形 complaints のほうが自然です。また change our jobs より change jobs のほうが口語ではよく使われます。
分類: 文法

元の発話: Yes,
and their complaints is a bit selfish for me.
推奨表現: Yes, and their complaints are a bit selfish to me.
理由: complaints は複数なので動詞は are になります。また for me より to me のほうがこの言い方では自然です。
分類: 文法

元の発話: because...
I think if they change their jobs,
they
will feel, they would feel same complaint in the next workplace because their complaints is they cannot satisfy with
their salary and
their relationship with their boss.
推奨表現: Because I think if they change their jobs, they will feel the same complaints in the next workplace, because their complaints are that they are not satisfied with their salary and their relationship with their boss.
理由: complaints is は主語と動詞の一致が合っていません。また satisfy with より be not satisfied with のほうが自然です。
分類: 文法

元の発話: Yeah, I think they should improve their skill before changing their jobs.
推奨表現: Yeah, I think they should improve their skills before changing jobs.
理由: skill はここでは複数形 skills のほうが自然です。また change jobs のほうが一般的です。
分類: 文法

元の発話: I think it will...
Could it will happen the same problem in other workplace?
推奨表現: I think it could happen the same way in another workplace.
理由: Could it will は語順が不自然です。could happen の形にすると、言いたい内容が自然に伝わります。
分類: 語順・構文

元の発話: Yeah, because they,
company,
they can be replaced.
推奨表現: Yeah, because they can be replaced by the company.
理由: 文のつながりが崩れているので、受け身の形にすると意味が明確になります。
分類: 語順・構文

元の発話: If they can improve their skills, the salary will be better
推奨表現: If they can improve their skills, their salary will be better.
理由: salary の前に所有格 their を入れると、誰の給料かが明確になります。
分類: 文法

元の発話: and the relationship with their boss might be...
uh might might be improved yeah
推奨表現: and their relationship with their boss might improve.
理由: might might be は重複しています。improve を動詞で使うと、より自然で簡潔です。
分類: 語彙・表現

元の発話: yes so and then uh i know a lot of people who
have a lot of complaints about their workplace and they often say I want to change my job but most of them don't change their job yeah
推奨表現: Yes, and I know a lot of people who have a lot of complaints about their workplace, and they often say, 'I want to change my job,' but most of them don't actually change jobs.
理由: 文が長くつながっているので、区切って言うと聞き取りやすくなります。また change their job より change jobs のほうが自然です。
分類: 語順・構文

元の発話: I
have changed my job four times in my career and then my
sorry two pharma job
推奨表現: I've changed jobs four times in my career, and then my two former jobs were in the pharma industry.
理由: job はここでは複数形 jobs のほうが自然です。また two former job は不自然なので、former jobs のように言うと伝わりやすくなります。
分類: 語彙・表現

元の発話: I take a good salary and then I have a lot of responsibility,
推奨表現: I had a good salary, and I had a lot of responsibility,
理由: 過去の話なので take より had のほうが自然です。
分類: 文法

元の発話: So I decided to change my job and then my salary,
my salary...
What's getting lower?
推奨表現: So I decided to change my job, and then my salary got lower.
理由: 過去の変化なので got lower と言うと自然です。途中の言い直しを整理すると伝わりやすくなります。
分類: 語順・構文

元の発話: So I have changed my job in my career and I decided by myself.
推奨表現: So I have changed jobs in my career, and I decided that by myself.
理由: change my job より change jobs のほうが自然です。また decided by myself だけだと少し不完全なので、that を入れると滑らかになります。
分類: 文法

元の発話: to
make my best career.
推奨表現: to build the best career for myself.
理由: make my best career は不自然です。build a career の形にすると、言いたい内容が自然に伝わります。
分類: 語彙・表現

元の発話: the reason why my father stay the company is to take salary
推奨表現: The reason why my father stayed at the company was to earn a salary.
理由: 過去の話なので stayed にし、stay the company ではなく stayed at the company が自然です。take salary より earn a salary が一般的です。
分類: 文法

元の発話: So
all he needs is go.
Office every day.
推奨表現: So all he needs to do is go to the office every day.
理由: needs is go は不自然です。needs to do is go to the office とすると、言いたい内容が自然にまとまります。
分類: 語順・構文

元の発話: but I think we need to prioritize what we do because if we don't interest in the things we do we cannot improve our skill
推奨表現: but I think we need to prioritize what we do because if we aren't interested in the things we do, we cannot improve our skills.
理由: don't interest in は文法的に不自然なので、aren't interested in にします。skills も複数形が自然です。
分類: 文法

元の発話: For example, changing our jobs to get more,
to get job more, to change our job to get.
推奨表現: For example, changing jobs can help us get a higher salary.
理由: 最後の部分は言い直しが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。言いたい内容を一文にまとめると自然になります。
分類: 語順・構文